I am ocean
spiral of ineffable incense
reflection of comets on Sun Moon Lake
bridge across the infinite chasm
path up Jade Mountain
breath of meditating butterflies
stillness of stone
eternal flow
perfect storm
primordial metaphor
that cannot be named.
道
Photo by Justin Hwang via Wikimedia Commons
Everything elegaic—except last line not sure about—felt like it said too much….Hmmm….need to think on it.
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Thanks for the feedback, jd. I love the fact that one can always revise if the need arises.
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Breathtakingly beautiful imagery and verse.
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Thank you so much, Jeff!
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As powerful as the ocean!
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Thanks, Julie!
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I love how this looks like a keyhole. Beautiful: breath of meditating butterflies!
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Thanks, Pam. I’m so glad I write and paint journals when I travel. Helps with the images.
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spiral of ineffable incense
reflection of comets on Sun Moon Lake
word images
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Yep…I’m sort of a visual writer. Thanks for stopping by. ❤
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